Sunday, October 26, 2008

Poetically Sugary

Brown Sugar

B reathe your magic
R uffle my heart
O pen my mind
W hisper in my ear
N ext to my heart

S how me a path
U nknown till now
G ive me a new life
A llow me a taste of
R eal Brown Sugar…

Poetically tinted

Now ain't this poetically sugary? Thanx a lot Lady.


aloted said...

ehn hen nice one!!! Can i get my name in poetic form as

how u doing?? how's school..dont be a stranger o!!! u've been missed

Just...Toluwa said...


Standtall said...

Poeticallytinted is in love with Brown Sugar. Sugar is good, it's lovely when it brown.

Jolaade said...

Nyc rhymes...
cocoa brown...
to tha brain behind this, thumbs up!

n believe me bloggers, Brown Sugar is all that and a bag of 'Pe-te-toes'!!! lol!

BrownSugar said...

Awwwww! Thanx Aloted, I won't be a stranger any more.

Thanx Toluwa. I'll forward the credits to Poetically tinted.

Ah no o! StandTall, It's simply a display of HER creativity.

Jolaade! Jolaade!! Jolaade!!!

Just...Toluwa said...

why r u MIA? oya come back o! thnx for noticing the change of my blog layout.

talesandtallies said...

woulda neva tot of sumthn like dis... nicely done

poeticallytinted said...

Thanks for the publicity. lol. Thanks for dropping by at mine.

AlooFar said...


BrownSugar said...

Thanx Talesandtallies and Aloofar. Poetically Tinted is now here to take the credits :-)
Toluwa, noted! I'll update asap.